Friday, 17 September 2021

my Narrative

in writing we have been learning about narratives, a  Narrative is a story.  what I Learnt that we had to write a story about  a Message in that is in that bottle what I write was I got a bottle in that bottle was a map then it lead me to a treasure I was  exited to see what was in it 

but it was a paper I cloud finally read but I heard a loud voice i was scared because it was loud and it was my 

mum I said ¨help me then she gaped me       the  end

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